Hi guys welcome back today I am going to share a piece of writing from my hotspot doc. This writing is about when a found a rabbit a catched it. Hope you guys like it please leave some feedback on what I can work on.
This morning when me and my mom were getting ready and starting to drive to school my mum spotted a rabbit and then she said ‘’khaylanie a rabbit’’ ‘’,where I said. ‘’There’’ . Oh there, what are you doing go and catch it.
I went outside of the car and trade to catch it but I couldn't. Then I told my mum, mum I can’t catch it. So then she pulled the car over and came and help me, and then we finally catch it and I was so happy. I grabbed the rabbit from my mum and held it like it was a baby.We went back in’to the car and she went and dropped me of. then she went home and dropped the rabbit of with my other rabbits and guinea pigs.
