In the past weeks our class (Ako Ngatahi) were writing a short story about a video titled “The Present”. It was a story about a boy who got a present and it was a puppy. After he discovered that the puppy only had three legs.
Here is the video
W.A.L.T: Write a narrative
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
- The title is suitable for the text.
- The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
- The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
- The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
The present
One sunny day I was playing my video games minecraft and nights . Suddenly my mum came home with a boxes then the phone was Ringing my mum said to open the so I did I opened the boxes slowly. Then a dog Jumped out I felt happy because it was Cute but then Saw the dog's leg it only had three legs I I pushed it away and started to play my video game .It find a red ball and it went to get it he Stumbled and fell I laghet I saw how the dog felt torment he felt sad that I didn't play with him I stand up and got the ball I had the same thing has him I walked outside and started to play. Mand my dog are going to be best friends
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